Magic Spells Poem

This is a poem that I wrote for English, and I won a prize for the best boy's poem in the class. I was voted for by my classmates. I won a spooky pen that lights up, and eyeballs come out. Tell me what you think of my poem.

Magic Spells

Hocus Pocus Diddley Dee,
Eternal looks that’s for me.
A spoonful of fake tan you must add ,
So you look like a handsome lad.
Pour in some anti wrinkle cream,
So that your face does gleam.
Here's a very handy tip,
Add some lip gloss for your lip.
Pour the potion into your bath,
Stay inside for an hour and a half.
When you get out open your eyes ,
And in the mirror there’s a surprise.


This is me and my friend holding up our poems which the teacher laminated. The teacher told us to pull funny faces. It was special Halloween day in English.