This is a poem that I wrote for English, and I won a prize for the best boy's poem in the class. I was voted for by my classmates. I won a spooky pen that lights up, and eyeballs come out. Tell me what you think of my poem.
Magic Spells
Hocus Pocus Diddley Dee,
Eternal looks that’s for me.
A spoonful of fake tan you must add ,
So you look like a handsome lad.
Pour in some anti wrinkle cream,
So that your face does gleam.
Here's a very handy tip,
Add some lip gloss for your lip.
Pour the potion into your bath,
Stay inside for an hour and a half.
When you get out open your eyes ,
And in the mirror there’s a surprise.
This is me and my friend holding up our poems which the teacher laminated. The teacher told us to pull funny faces. It was special Halloween day in English.
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Hehe that's a great poem Sam. Very you. Although I'd be careful with the lip gloss if I were you!
Here's a little poem of my own for you.
My nephew Sam's a talented lad
Even if he's a little bit mad
He seems to be good at everything
The envy, I think, of every king
I am sure that he'll do well
In every area he'll excel
Acting, singing, writing poems
What will he choose? No-one knows!
Well done Sam, I love your poem!
Very good Sam - Love Grannie & Grandad xxxxx
Love the poem Sam, heres one for you---
There was a young fella named Sam,
Who smothered himself in fake tan,
He went on the stage,became all the rage,
But his tan got all wet and it ran.
Have a good day
Love G.|G.Dad Peter
Sam I get a nice surprise everytime i look in the mirror!!
love daddy
well done
I wonder where Sam gets his modesty from? Hmmm. Let me think. Oh yes, his Dad!
Mum
Hi Sam, I've only just found your blog! I love the poem, and Maddi and G Grandad's too! How funny! I love your smart uniform, and the cute little fish, and everything else you've blogged about so far! Keep it up young intelligent, smart, handsome lad! Love Auntie Jen x
Hi Sam, I've only just found your blog! I love the poem, and Maddi and G Grandad's too! How funny! I love your smart uniform, and the cute little fish, and everything else you've blogged about so far! Keep it up young intelligent, smart, handsome lad! Love Auntie Jen x
this is very good
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